All Comments on 'Help Me Dear Diary'

I really enjoyed your story, don’t worry about minimal grammar, the feeling came through loud and clear. So well that I re read it while stroking, I enjoy all the things you write about and the watersports at the end had me cumming. Keep writing please, you have talent.

You are an excellent writer. If I were to rate your story, it would be top marks for that reason. I absolutely hate your main characters, although your ability to provoke such strong emotions also shows your good writing abilities. The reason I decline to rate it is that despite your talent as a writer, the story and its theme have no redeeming value of any kind. This is just a story of selfish people doing things that are destructive to those around them and eventually to themselves. They are all butts.