- Mature
- Helper Hannah
- Page 2
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Click hereThey cuddled in silence, her head on his shoulder while he stroked her hair and brushed her ear. She softly purred, and eventually they drifted off to sleep. They slept soundly, sweet dreams, blue skies and sunshine and for once not dark clouds and demons. But eventually the sound of a door knob wiggling, and then a knock woke them up, followed by a young voice, "Hey, are you two both in there? What are you doing?"
- COMMENTS
Rancher46over 3 years agoSuch a sad but wonderful love story, from Nanny to Lover to Wife for Jim and a replacement mom for Cameron. Would make an interesting tale. Well done 5 stars
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoThank you for a well put together story!! I look forward to reading more of your stories!!
bnaylor987almost 5 years agoAuthorChapter 2 has been started, but it so far has drifted towards a "non-erotic" story. So far it continues in a linear fashion with the conflict appearing early in when his wife died, and nothing real scandalous with Hannah. I want to get it "right" and just not write something to post.
Currently I am writing about Scott's home-cumming. I appreciate your support and kind words. If anyone has any ideas, let me know. I do have a story started, but I want to be able to impress you and not just finish a story.
Thanks,
Brad
bnaylor987about 5 years agoAuthorUltimatehomebody:
Don't worry, I am working on chapter 2. The concept is done but I want to play it out a little more and decide it chapter 2 ends it or it will need a chapter 3.
I like the short 2 page or so quick reads. Get in, quick read, come back later. I know some people would rather read 5 or 10 pages and finish the story, and I understand some people don't like multiple chapters, and I guess I appeal to them to stick with me.
My favorite series are "Scabbard and Blade" and "Super Seven". You have a small, 2 or 3 page read and it ends a thought and then when you feel like it you can come back and read the next. The fact that S&B is 3 chapters (I keep appealing to my friend Red to write more!) and MABSLS has said he intends two more chapters of Super 7 on top of the current 7 chapters is something I enjoy.
So hopefully you will stick with me and hopefully I don't disappoint in return. Thank you for the comments and hopefully within a few days I will have the reaction story posted.
Brad
UltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years agoYou finished one sentence too early, would have loved to hear their explanation.
Reggie2xxabout 5 years agoThat was a very good story I like it very much just enough sex to get into literotica.
catteniabout 5 years agoNot my usual taste but very well written and room for a lot more 5*
