by alisontanner
Couldn't have been any better. No need for improvement. This author needs to teach others how to wrote like this. My dick is so hard right now. Wow!
you must carry one this story and not leave your readers in suspence
I love hearing how women slip down the slide of decadence until they have their own sons. I can't wait for Chapter 2!
hello, it was a good read, very erotic, not a new storyline, but you told a good story. The mothers reluctance to see her sons sexuality and her refusal to accept that she wanted to cross the line - I do hope there may be another chapter.
Kim
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The "son can't take care of himself so Mom lends a helping hand" idea has been done to death, but I liked the writing of the story.
Nice handling of an old theme. Keep going. A gentle ride would make them both feel better and quiet the itch between her legs too.
Yesssss......I loved it so much that I shared the story with a male family friend who got so hard that I had to jerk him off...did I mention YUMMY.
You have a good touch -- not too heavy but definitely exciting. Keep writing!
Just to say i loved this story very good now of to read part two!
His mother is a very loving woman, and it's so hot that she gave him a blow job to release his tension.
Thanks for the good read
You have all the right elements, for a great story. A loving and caring Mother and a son who is young and ready to learn. thanks for a good read.....LAROC OF AGES
she gave him a hand job that same morning.
read your own story!!!
Always a hot start , then it's never ended. His mother is not the only thing that sucks. try again