All Comments on 'Helping Hands Ch. 01'

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toJohnny7toJohnny7over 17 years ago
Erotic masterpiece!

Couldn't have been any better. No need for improvement. This author needs to teach others how to wrote like this. My dick is so hard right now. Wow!

gedwardgedwardover 17 years ago
the next chapter

you must carry one this story and not leave your readers in suspence

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fantastic!

Bloody great, really horny stuff - got me off so good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great start

looking foward to the next part

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
come on, dude, don't jerk us poor readers like

that,,, it's not nice!

hornygrannyhornygrannyover 17 years ago
Very Nice!

I love hearing how women slip down the slide of decadence until they have their own sons. I can't wait for Chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Beautifully told story!

And incredibly erotic! Hope there's a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good Story

hello, it was a good read, very erotic, not a new storyline, but you told a good story. The mothers reluctance to see her sons sexuality and her refusal to accept that she wanted to cross the line - I do hope there may be another chapter.

Kim

kimnicelips@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very nice

The "son can't take care of himself so Mom lends a helping hand" idea has been done to death, but I liked the writing of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nicely done - looking for more.

Nice handling of an old theme. Keep going. A gentle ride would make them both feel better and quiet the itch between her legs too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great story

One of the best stories read so far please continue

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Yummy... oh so yummy

Yesssss......I loved it so much that I shared the story with a male family friend who got so hard that I had to jerk him off...did I mention YUMMY.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good job

You have a good touch -- not too heavy but definitely exciting. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
loved it

Just to say i loved this story very good now of to read part two!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 13 years ago
That's a good start

His mother is a very loving woman, and it's so hot that she gave him a blow job to release his tension.

Thanks for the good read

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
You write a good story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You have all the right elements, for a great story. A loving and caring Mother and a son who is young and ready to learn. thanks for a good read.....LAROC OF AGES

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
it can't be his first if . . .

she gave him a hand job that same morning.

read your own story!!!

ShysquirterShysquirterabout 10 years ago
Well done.

I loved all of the buildup.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 9 years ago

A well used theme but a hot story nonetheless.

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 6 years ago
WHY WHY WHY !!!!!!!!!!

Always a hot start , then it's never ended. His mother is not the only thing that sucks. try again

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great

love the story and reading the next two ch...

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