All Comments on 'Helping Hands Ch. 03'

Please continue this story.

I love the subtitle, "Sister's hands cause a sticky mess." It's so fine when a loving sister whacks off her needy brother. Shelly not only fists her brother Joe's big cock but she cups his balls as well--such a loving gesture from a sister. She really likes it when Joe's brotherly balls let loose with all his creamy semen, it makes her so wet between her legs. Now, Joe's a fair guy, so he starts exploring Shelly's cute little coochie with his tongue and inhaling her intoxicating rich musky pussy scent deep in his lungs. He'll be doing some lickety-split on his sis real soon, and when Joe's all recovered, watch out, Shel. Your brother Joe's big hard cock'll find its natural home, right up your sweet little slit.

Awaiting the next chapter.

Even old plots are good when it's well written and interesting. The innocent but "I wanna be bad" personality of the sister is great. Hopefully the brother develops more personality than being a convenient dick.

PS: Your editor is doing a great job, but I'll be happy to edit if you need someone at some point.

Initially, I felt like there was a little gap between where chpt 2 ended and chpt 3 started, but alas, it was a dream. Nice (but will he really be able to fit?).

Will the dream become a reality?

Will reality be BETTER than the dream?

Will Shelley (nurse Thompson) become an independent caregiver specializing in injured athletic males with body casts? ( maybe expand to laid-up females or for a real twist, assisting a recovering limited mobility COUPLE (catastrophic auto accident on their honeymoon? ) LMAO)

thank you

Shy, I think you love making your readers develop some patience; I have none!

Please, please continue on ... Your skills seem to be getting better & better, or do you just have a great editor?

Seriously, I love the way you are developing this story and can't wait to read each new chapter.

Great story, more please

Just read through chapters 1-3 and loved the build-up and progression. To the other comment below, I too was thrown by the start of Ch.3 as being too much too fast, but then the dream sequence seemed ok. Really looking forward to the continuation of slowly crumbling boundaries. Nice author's handle too!!! :)

I love your writing style. It draws you in and gets you addicted and the slow pace just makes it better. Keep it up and I promise you won't have any trouble keeping me UP.

Nuff said.

You must continue this!!!!!! This is fucking hot as hell!!!!!! MOARRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!

Please continue this!

I hope you'll continue this soon!

A very well written story and incredibly hot. Can't wait to read more!

Just have to finish up the juicy details.

CUMIN!

It's not done.

Good story! I simply MUST make one comment. Not “every woman, except hippies” shave their female pubic hair! Maybe because I am from a different generation, but I LOVE FEMALE PUBIC HAIR! If a woman is shaved it makes me feel like a pedophile.. And Old Al, Is NO pedophile!

Still a great story, and you made it work. You have enough background in there that it’s not her doing all this in a page and a half. It’s been almost a month by the timeline you have put out for readers to easily follow. Many authors forget that what is obvious to the writer isn’t necessarily obvious to readers. That’s a big deal in stories, and you have it mastered!