by AnnasFriend
Another excellent chapter! I hope that there will be additional chapters.
Possibly even better than the first, and I really like the mirroring of the ending of part 1. Really great storyline here!
Lovely follow-up to part 1 with the transition to a slightly more taboo theme very well handled and well paced. I thought the build-up to taking Ellie to bed flowed really well.
It took a turn I wasn’t expecting. I hope that the next chapter is soon. Thanks
What a lovely, loving, and gentle story - Thank-you! It's well-written, with good characters & situations ... Just great! :) I'll certainly be waiting for Chapter 3. :)
That was an incredibly hot chapter in a really great story!
I noticed that Ellie and Rob are roughly the same ages as Belinda was when she started sleeping with Charles. Rob taking over Charles' dominant role with Belinda, and her encouraging him to bed both daughters would be glorious!
I hope history repeats itself and Rob eventually has kids with Ellie. You can tell from his interactions with Penelope that he'd be a great father.
Rob had a really lovely character arc in the previous chapter, and I think this chapter does less in that regard. On the other hand, Belinda is amazing and everyone's happy. Very good stuff, thank you for continuing to write and share!
sensitive 2 parter, well written, no spelling mistakes, erotic, hugely enjoyed both ... there's a mistake though ... it ends in the middle of nowehere ... I think several sequels are in order :)) well done.
I am almost confounded at how excellently written that was. Elegantly written, with fantastic characterization. You should be very proud.
Absolutely love this story. Your writing has a way to it as you draw the story out, you draw me in more.
Fabulous
Another brilliant chapter. Thoroughly recommend your other stories too. Well written character development and bloody hot sex scenes, what more could one want? 5 stars