All Comments on 'Helping Her, Saving Me Ch. 02'

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antietampwantietampwalmost 4 years ago

Another excellent chapter! I hope that there will be additional chapters.

bufordstimpkinsbufordstimpkinsalmost 4 years ago

Possibly even better than the first, and I really like the mirroring of the ending of part 1. Really great storyline here!

silveraidersilveraideralmost 4 years ago
Well written

Lovely follow-up to part 1 with the transition to a slightly more taboo theme very well handled and well paced. I thought the build-up to taking Ellie to bed flowed really well.

ender2k2kender2k2kalmost 4 years ago
Good story

It took a turn I wasn’t expecting. I hope that the next chapter is soon. Thanks

ArediaArediaalmost 4 years ago

What a lovely, loving, and gentle story - Thank-you! It's well-written, with good characters & situations ... Just great! :) I'll certainly be waiting for Chapter 3. :)

devildog0302devildog0302almost 4 years ago
Nice story

Please continue...

PowersworderPowersworderalmost 4 years ago

That was an incredibly hot chapter in a really great story!

I noticed that Ellie and Rob are roughly the same ages as Belinda was when she started sleeping with Charles. Rob taking over Charles' dominant role with Belinda, and her encouraging him to bed both daughters would be glorious!

I hope history repeats itself and Rob eventually has kids with Ellie. You can tell from his interactions with Penelope that he'd be a great father.

Rambling_ChantrixRambling_Chantrixalmost 4 years ago

Rob had a really lovely character arc in the previous chapter, and I think this chapter does less in that regard. On the other hand, Belinda is amazing and everyone's happy. Very good stuff, thank you for continuing to write and share!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Excellent story, very well written!

ChrissrChrissralmost 4 years ago

Looking forward to part 3!!

TwoGunKidtgkTwoGunKidtgkalmost 4 years ago

So hot ! More please!!

TomNJaxTomNJaxover 3 years ago

Great story, anxiously waiting for the chapterssss !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
very good

sensitive 2 parter, well written, no spelling mistakes, erotic, hugely enjoyed both ... there's a mistake though ... it ends in the middle of nowehere ... I think several sequels are in order :)) well done.

pcman1950pcman1950over 3 years ago

Lovely! Trust further chapters are forthcoming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Insanely well written

I am almost confounded at how excellently written that was. Elegantly written, with fantastic characterization. You should be very proud.

Dave747Dave747over 3 years ago
Exciting

Well written with a very high anticipation quota!

rightbankrightbankover 3 years ago
long and steady build

to a surprising cliff hanging end

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Absolutely love this story. Your writing has a way to it as you draw the story out, you draw me in more.

Fabulous

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Fantastic series.. 5 stars all the way!

SparkyblueoneSparkyblueoneover 2 years ago

Another brilliant chapter. Thoroughly recommend your other stories too. Well written character development and bloody hot sex scenes, what more could one want? 5 stars

Runner4069Runner4069over 2 years ago

Such a great and wonderful story for sure! Thanks for sharing!

Ohio47ManOhio47Manabout 2 years ago

Each part of the story gets better … I can’t wait to read Part 3. :)

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

Fantastic follow up

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

great!

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