All Comments on 'Helping Johnny'

Poorly written. It's obvious English is not your first language. In your biography you stated not to expect much since you're new to this site.

You proved yourself right. First impressions mean something, you just wasted yours.

Don't listen to assholes. Sometimes I loose track of grammar when writing something erotic. Hormones and clean english don't always match up.

All in all, tii hi s is a very sexy story appealing to many fantasies and also taboos.

To me if it's your first, first story, it ain't too bad.

I'm glad you reached out (assuming this to be a true story.) Tenderness shows. Actually not anonymous - Path2ozark.

As a father of a mentally handicapped adult son I really liked this short story.

I would like more details with her lessons.

Perhaps she could help Johnny with his new girlfriend?

That was a fine thing u did for that young man. Most women wouldnt see what u saw in him. Now his life can be more fulfilling that ever. It takes a special person to do what u did.

For a first story you have some good talent. I do have to point out there is a huge difference between a learning disability and having Downs Syndrome. Just pointing that out. Good instincts in your writing. Keep it up.

A nicely written story which I believe is a true account. It shows you are a caring loving woman, the sort any guy would love to have .Keep writing don’t let the trolls bother you

First story!

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This is a Wonderful Heart warming story of a Caring Women who saw and understood the lack of education and physical needs of Johnny. Thank You!

A lovely story. Men like Johnny need sex too for sure and you were kind enough to give it. Well written story too.

Interesting approach to those among us who need a guiding hand.