All Comments on 'Helping Melinda Be Naughty Ch. 03'

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storytellerXH9storytellerXH9over 1 year ago

Melinda's fantasy - or was it a fantasy? -- is a terrific piece of multi-layered writing. Her character becomes deeper with each episode. Sam's engagement becomes more complex, while poor Jake just wonders what the hell is happening. Nice work.

Westman99Westman99over 1 year ago

Well I didn't see that one coming (no pun intended). Again you're playing with our minds not Jakes or Sam's. Not sure where you can take us from here but looking forward to the flight. A.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ch. 04 coming along? Or are you like Mel, just messing with our minds?

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrabout 1 year ago

Wow, and she never even touches herself! Man that is an exciting tale.

Can't wait for the next chapter ;->

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