All Comments on 'Helping Mickey Ch. 02'

It's quite obvious that you have spent a great deal of time doing research on severe head injury as you have given it credibility and that what make this story so good and believable. I would rather read a story like this then a quick jerk off one.

It is looking like Susan it starting to understand Mickey better which each passing that day. I have to admit that white hallway had a very real meaning that at this time Susan doesn't understand it. It has to do with the past I thimk but aren't sure. I have given your chapter a 5 because it high quality of work and suspense.

i am starting to think the white hallway is refering to the coma and how he felt or what he saw while in it. now that he has told her what he heard from the doc and her talking he just cant say what it was for lack of reference. she seems tobe getting it a little at a time though and just maybe them sleeping together in the next chapter or 2 might be good thing for him.

In thinking he's talking about the light at the end of a tunnel,,like when you die.

A lot of our young solders who have suffered with head injuries from the war could have been in the same situation as this poor guy.

A sad affair and all too real. Makes you think how bad some of the guys are coming home.

Thanks for the read.

Normally I Would be running for the hills is after reading 2 chapters I had not encountered any steamy scenes. Your story is clearly not a normal case. I love it and hate it at the same time. Very rarely will just a bunch of words grip me the way how yours has. I look forward to reading more.

I'm so captivated by this story!! You are doing a wonderful job.. Can't wait for more.

Please write ch 03 fast I love this story have a wonderful day

I really enjoyed the story so far. It's good to see that someone isn't rushing anything between Micky and Susan. I can't wait for chapter 3 to find out what's next for them. Keep up the good work!!

I have to say that never once while reading this did I even consider going to a different story or author. This is absolutely fabulous and if you haven't thought about writing professionally, you should seriously consider it.

You have a way with words that many of the writers here do not - not even close. Not only is her conversation clear and adroit, it portrays the right amount of confusions and concerns, believably, to both Mickey and the reader. A very difficult thing to do!

You had damned well BETTER continue!

It's refreshing to finally read a decent story that is viewed from the victim's point of view as well as others. Explaining how I feel and/or see things to the Doc's as well as to Family members is extremely difficult when they can't or won't open up and listen with more than their ears. I say this as the victim of a head wound myself. I can't wait for more.

What wonderful writing. The emotions you invoke are raw and meaningful. The quality of your work is such that you should be in the mainstream. I am a writer and I can recognise talent. Please keep writing.

Some of the very best dialogue I've ever read. I've read fantastic published novels that didn't come close to the quality of your writing here. Dialogue, plausibility and possibly even more important, timing.

Thank you author.

Bloody wonderful

Read the first two Chapters and gonna start on #3. Original, gripping story line. I LOVE it.

And white hallway was what I had guessed. This sort of mysterious storyline reminds of me the TV show Lost. This site and its close-minded inhabitants don't deserve to read such a well written story. 5/5 again.

called the Jumble.

Everything is there, you just have to put it in the right order for it to make sense.

Keep on writing. This is a beautiful story. :)

What a wonderful moving story. One of the best, truly!

5/5

Phenomenal. Truly.