All Comments on 'Helping Mom Move'

Trying to visualize this.............. well ok then, I failed. But I guess they would be a most amazing shape.

You write like a young teenager!

One of those "wham, bam, thank you mom" tales. Not so hot for me, I'm afraid. One or two spelling mistakes leapt out at me. But bravo anyway for daring...

Have you reached puberty yet?

Are you meaning skislope that curve up to a nice pointy nipple

You need to slow down and add more detail. You’re rushing to get to the good stuff; then you rushed through that, as well. Focus on your grammar, as well. Commas are your friend.

For the read.

So erotic for anyone that have made love to their mother.

The banana tits did not work at all, awkward writing through out but cute story, a 3 from me.

Very hot but it could have been longer. You could also benefit from an editor or a proofreader as there were numerous small mistakes.