All Comments on 'Helping Mrs. Jackson Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

The story blew.

I would have had Josh get Susan pregnant and he would have hooked up with Erica and he would have gotten her pregnant as well.

MASTERLEE9MASTERLEE9about 2 years ago

why are you leaving us hanging come on finish it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

a shitty story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

wasted time

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

How long has the idiot Dunkirk been making foolish commenrs. Story is really bad, but I'm not sure Dunkie can read. His mom probably read the story to him.

EIoPolizeiEIoPolizeiabout 4 years ago
??

What kind of ending is this? The way she turned into a cheating wife was utterly laughable and after that the story just cuts of.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
chapter 4

husband see's Andrew forcing himself on her raping her

he does nothing till after the party

when he ask's Andrew that will have an important meeting on Monday at the office

where he will force him to give him his share of the company or he will press charges

for raping his wife.

which he does Andrew is now broke goes and gets drunk drives his car head on with a 45 footer van dies on the spot .

after Erica learns about the fertility clinic that her husbands sperm count is low plus the fact that he has been cheating on her she asks for a divorce and get's half.

NewnotsureNewnotsurealmost 5 years ago
Okay now what

Only a three chapter story that stops when it is getting good . We need more on this one for sure.

moblanemoblanealmost 5 years ago
And Then??????

Well, If ever a story warranted a conclusion this one certainly does..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
What if.

So what if he did get her pregnant as she desired? She and husband would know she cheated and she knows she would get tossed out. So a bastard child is worth losing the marriage. She must be confident she would be set for life. I hope he finds out about this episode and trashes her big time. She deserves to go down in flames. Maybe mexican whorehouse time!

Huedogg2Huedogg2almost 5 years ago
Not commenting to next chapter

What to what hubby does

DunkirkDunkirkalmost 5 years ago

Erica needs to get Josh's cock in her cunt. He can give her what she wants

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