All Comments on 'Helping My Girlfriend's Sister'

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barepussloverbarepussloveralmost 15 years ago
Hot!

There is a need for additional Chapters for this one!

Athena_e19Athena_e19almost 15 years ago
Great story, more development, less commas!

Great story- definitely fitting the stroke category. Only suggestion I would have in the future is try to avoid carrying the sentences on forever with lots of commas. The action gets a bit harder to track when you pushing, then pulling, then kissing, then groping, then pumping....

But great beginning. Would have liked a little more buildup before the big climaxes!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Good start to the story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

You’ve never had sex have you? If you had you’d have realised the impossibility of kissing while doing doggy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

""Hell no!" I said, as I pushed Kate onto all fours and guided my still-hard cock into her wet and inviting pussy, thrusting into her until my balls were resting against her ass."

How do you manage that? Fucking her from behind while your balls are resting against her ass? Your balls are placed above your cock?

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