All Comments on 'Helping Out His New Neighbour Pt. 01'

not realy my thing bdsm but storywise it was fine, will like to read a next chapter.

An interesting start... very eager to see where this leads , but you should pay more attention to the spelling,lol

Great start. Looking forward to the next chapter.

So the guy helps her unpack, catches her when she falls and she wants revenge? And the guy agrees to be tied up by some random

Woman who he’s just met who then locks him

Up for a month and he goes along with it? He’s got to be dumbest ass going.

Should be in BDSM and I’d have skipped it as all the femdom abuse is all a little over done

Interesting way to start an obvious series, looking forward to reading the next instalment. She has a new pet and how is she going to treat/train him?

The first thing you need to do is get someone to proofread your story and edit it. Mis spelled words, incorrect tense and punctuation, all of it detracts from your story.

Strange, rather naïvely written, and impossible to read due to literally hundreds of errors. Has to be your second language, so well done, but please use the tools available in Word or Google Docs and Grammarly, and get an editor.