All Comments on 'Helping the Karlssons Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
unusual theme, well-written

This, the story of two religious, church-going girls who also happen to love sex is highly unusual, but it is very well-written, although it could have used both a more extensive introduction to the characters, greater character development, and a longer love scene at the end. However, given the unusual theme of this story, it still deserves Five stars.

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Writing has slowed somewhat due to other 'life' matters. I am pleased that others continue to enjoy my stories. If you want professional quality writing, perhaps you ought to find a site where you can pay for that. I tend to ignore critiques or 'helpful suggestions' from 'ano...

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