All Comments on 'Helping Wendy'

by Lynda68

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good, but...

I liked your story and it did turn me on. However, it is difficult to read in places because of the poor grammer. I would suggest that you try to find an editor to help you with that. Otherwise, good job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
All the right kinks

Awesome story. Really appreciated how you tied all the kinky little fantasies together. Thnx

awyldsideawyldsideabout 3 years ago

wonderful. I'm glad they only shared together.

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Middle aged crossdresser. wltm similar. I tend to rattle off my stories. I have re-read them sometimes. But found myself writing something totally different to what I intended. So please excuse the bad grammar. Obviously if you want to volunteer so edit..... All comments are...