All Comments on 'Helpless'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
what next?

Kind of took a long time to get to it, but when you get there it's worth it. Well written lifelike scene, just wondering whether or not it continues...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
what the fuck was with the ending

like holy crap this shit was alright till and I quote "My last conscious thought was sucking at her breasts as she cradled my head and cooed at me "It's OK baby, all done, sleep now my darling save your strength." this just reket my boner like holy crap I went from 10 to 2 in less then a sec

superb breasts pick a god dam pick a better word come on brah know you shit homie

ily bae for lyf <3 8============D~~~~~~ then it like shrivelled up and shot its self

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
i loved this but

superb breasts is a odd chose of words

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
superb breasts

"superb breasts" sounds just fine; don't listen to those guys.

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