All Comments on 'Hen Night Captive'

I love how there's always someone commenting about the police... Seems they write these comments after their refractory period and the shame of what turns them on sets in. Anyways, fun story. Please write some more.

Unless the male character has suddenly overcome his shame about being dressed up, let alone being taken, then I doubt he’d want to relive it in court. I think he’d also realise that it would be his word against those of half a dozen women.

If there were to be a sequel at all I think he would submit to becoming the narrator’s boyfriend, either because of blackmail or Stockholm syndrome, and would end up going to the hen’s wedding. The reunion would no doubt cause him to become one of the girls again, only this time he would slowly admit to himself and them that he loved it.

Strange scenario, but I guess, that's what they do now.

His reluctance and subsequent acquiescence are beautiful.

Very arousing tale.....

Send them all to jail. You are talking reluctance and non-con.