by Cathleen
You do not find stories like this one every day, especially one so well written and thought out. I presume you wouldn't mind if I use your story as an example to try imitate, do you?
I really like the way you flesh out the characters with their objectives clearly stated and realized. What a fantasy for any woman who desires more than just a casual fuck, but a meaningful and fulfilling experience that both can cherish forever!
http://www.writing.com/authors/wargon
Cathlene!!!
Just read your wonderful submission, It was a wonderful storie. It was so well writen that it made me feel that I was the one with her. Hope to see more of your submissions soon.
Drphel
I loved the story. Very romantically erotic. Well-paced in buliding to full intimacy.
Great story! I love the sensuality in your writing, it paints very erotic pictures of your stories, I hope there will be ch.03 :)