All Comments on 'Her Best Friend's Son Ch. 01'

I was seriously enjoying that and then it stopped, cant figure you had no sexual inter action between them which could have graduated to full on sex in the next chapter

Looking forward to the next chapter

Nothing happens?

Very good buildup. Surprised at low rating.

Your paragraphs are far too long. They need to be punchy and to the point. I am sorry, but reading a couple of them just got so boring..Try writing paragraphs that are no longer than three lines, two would be better.

Can't beat a slow build up, but isn't this story one for the mature category?

Keep going!

Good start but I kept waiting for the mom to show up to have sex which would be incest. The desires of a fake auntie is not incest. You want the Mature category.