by Cheezy89
Nice twist at the end, hinting at the wife joining in the fun. Compensating for the somewhat conventional sub worshipping boss cliche. Will future chapters continue to surprise?
The fundamentals are all there for many tales – I’m sure you’re already outlining many of them. Well done, thanks for the effort and commitment!
Great first entry. Though, this could just be me, I think there should have been some line breaks with the dialog in the latter half, instead of just a huge paragraph.
Dominant without being stupidly cruel. Very hot. 5*, short but well done.
Wow. I've had bosses that I've had this fantasy with! Well done. More, please.
We need more!!! This used to be me and my boss and it was amazing. It only stopped because I left the company