All Comments on 'Her Boss Becomes Her Owner'

by Cheezy89

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Promising start

Nice twist at the end, hinting at the wife joining in the fun. Compensating for the somewhat conventional sub worshipping boss cliche. Will future chapters continue to surprise?

LooneyLooneyover 3 years ago
Interesting

Please continue. Very arousing

Mobile49Mobile49over 3 years ago
Hot

Can’t wait to see what else the boss has in mind

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More Chapters

I hope this is just the start of a long story...

SenorDomSenorDomover 3 years ago
Excellent Foundation

The fundamentals are all there for many tales – I’m sure you’re already outlining many of them. Well done, thanks for the effort and commitment!

DoortotheDoortotheover 3 years ago

Great first entry. Though, this could just be me, I think there should have been some line breaks with the dialog in the latter half, instead of just a huge paragraph.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
just right

Dominant without being stupidly cruel. Very hot. 5*, short but well done.

zingfishzingfishover 3 years ago
Very hot

Wow. I've had bosses that I've had this fantasy with! Well done. More, please.

Master_DevMaster_Devover 3 years ago

Good job! What´s next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More!!!

We need more!!! This used to be me and my boss and it was amazing. It only stopped because I left the company

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Splendid

This was amazing, please write more!

Gym52Gym52about 1 year ago

EXCELLENT 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Congratulations on a beautifully crafted piece of work.

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