by karin_n_karinna1
Hmmm...a sub still recognising herself as "Mommy" is sickly problematic. Kayla must fully own her.
If the only way you will continue your own story is if people kiss your ass, don't bother.
The collaboration of K&K and PP...the consumate team. Very SPECIAL
re 'Don't bother if kissing your ass is what's needed to submit Part 2'...1: Where are U getting that from? Did U notice That U are the ONLY ONE who feels that way? My take-away from the authors' request is that if enough readers like Part 1, then they'll feel justified in providing Part 2, 3, etc. Respectfully, at least post a comment with an alias assigned to it so that the Authors can curse you out, instead of sniping from behind *Anonymous* (bitch-move)
Part 2 (and 3, 4, 5, etc) are indeed warranted. I hope they are posted soon. I awarded 5 stars
Although short, this first foray into the world of lesbian incest was fantastic!! Applause all around. But, please, more... back story, what was the evolution of their trysts? When did she first start to have sexual feeling for her little girl? Did mommy get wet for her little girl when she was a little girl? How did mom discover she was a sexually submissive, bi-sexual, incestuous slut? Who seduced who?
I look forward to reading more and stroking to your nastiest thoughts.
Kisses and KUDOS, My Love, 4 setting that SIMPLETON ST8! Anyone with a functioning brain can discern our meaning behind the request for comments; we failed to 'spell out' the meaning in kindergarten terms that we'll BASE WHETHER WE SUBMIT PART TWO on whether there's enough 'demand' for it, ie: shopkeepers stock product based in part on their patron's DESIRE for said product: low demand for RUTAGEGAS, FEWER of that vegetable stocked....tgere seems to be high interest in a second chapter, and so the people (who have elected to) have spoken (also, the rating is quite respectable, so expect Chapter Two as soon as time permits). CHEERS, Love!!
Thank you for your input; @ least you have sack enough to attach your alias...Kayla is a NEW DOMME; HER MUM A NEW SUBBIE; as they 'settle into' their roles the language they use ("Mistress, May I"; Please Fuck This Unworthy Slave's Arse), or "On your knees, Slave Mum", or "Clean My Cock Like the Slut Bitch You Are" should become part of their verbal intraction in future.
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re: PART TWO
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No chapter # = automatic rating of 1.
KEEP THIS SHIT TO YOURSELVES
What an HIJO(A) DE PUTA (asshole idiot simple-minded hater)...just mark the story 1 star and MOVE ON; what is the point in rubbing in salt-contact the author? Obviously, many of this consider your complaint petty and senseless (rated at least 4 stars out of five). I so admire these Ladies, and their MOM, Patty Parker (60).
or is it the TWO OF YOU who mentor the Author?
I think that the mother daughter relationship will work well if this sort of behaviour continues. The mother is quite submisses and seems to enjoy the scene.
I hope the daughter engages in a slightly more violent relationship with her mother in the future.
I would love to hear more from the domme side of this family, as well as how they interact with the 'invisible' father Mom has mentioned. Please indulge us!