by TheLordYourDog
How pathetic. If I could give a minus score, I would.
Really cannot understand what either of them get out of this relationship.
Revolting nonsense.
I prefer the ending with the screams of the slave and his frustration,Not that he calmed down and accepted his fate.
So the climax is at the end of the sentence
She has a whole dungeon of torture devices and toys, and doesn't use them . At least some bullwhipping or flogging, stretched on the rack whilst gagged & blindfolded. Of course use a giant strap on on his ass or forcibly cross dress him to look like a whore. Not that'd be fun and fucked with the strapon.
very good storyline,but far too short..maybe you would consider another 2 chapters of this in the future?