All Comments on 'Her Dungeon and His Sentence'

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RuneulfRuneulfover 4 years ago
Great story!

So powerful a scene. I hope you will continue for us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

How pathetic. If I could give a minus score, I would.

Really cannot understand what either of them get out of this relationship.

Revolting nonsense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I prefer the ending with the screams of the slave and his frustration,Not that he calmed down and accepted his fate.

So the climax is at the end of the sentence

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A lot of laws being broken here .

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

She has a whole dungeon of torture devices and toys, and doesn't use them . At least some bullwhipping or flogging, stretched on the rack whilst gagged & blindfolded. Of course use a giant strap on on his ass or forcibly cross dress him to look like a whore. Not that'd be fun and fucked with the strapon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

great start..

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

very good storyline,but far too short..maybe you would consider another 2 chapters of this in the future?

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