by better_dayes
Not a great fan of anything anal normally... But the sheer sensory intensity of the writing had me completely spellbound. Fabulous!
Such a beautifully written story, every word. Please write more, this site needs more gorgeous writing like this.
I admire how you explain the world through this person with exceptional smell. Mine isn't great, and so it's something I have trouble writing about. I enjoyed reading this sensory piece. Just a couple of times the tense slipped from past to present, but it wasn't derailing.
Brilliant writing. I loved every word. Now if I could just meet Violet myself...
I was so horny, when i readed this story, this facesitting and smells drives me crazy,