All Comments on 'Her Face-Sitting Fantasy Pt. 01'

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SiteNonSiteSiteNonSiteabout 3 years ago

You had me at "petrichor".

Only_connectOnly_connectabout 3 years ago

Not a great fan of anything anal normally... But the sheer sensory intensity of the writing had me completely spellbound. Fabulous!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Such a beautifully written story, every word. Please write more, this site needs more gorgeous writing like this.

William_WoodWilliam_Woodabout 3 years ago

I admire how you explain the world through this person with exceptional smell. Mine isn't great, and so it's something I have trouble writing about. I enjoyed reading this sensory piece. Just a couple of times the tense slipped from past to present, but it wasn't derailing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brilliant writing. I loved every word. Now if I could just meet Violet myself...

NylonpassionNylonpassion23 days ago

I was so horny, when i readed this story, this facesitting and smells drives me crazy,

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