All Comments on 'Her Fears Became Reality Ch. 01'

by mad4raves

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Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiover 12 years ago
ohhh

ohh yeah I love non conscenst storeis that grab my interest, I am loving this onw, keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Can't wait for the next part!

Very excited, hope you are a quick writer!!

mad4ravesmad4ravesover 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks guys!

Trust me, I hate it when people start stories and never finish them. Such a bummer! I have the next to chapters pending as we speak, and I will try to get more written after that. Thanks for the comments! <3

DirtyDancin31DirtyDancin31over 12 years ago
KEEP GOING!!!

That's all :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Where's the BEEF (END) ?????????

Where I like the start it seems that you have no idea how to put an ending to it

So when I voted I voted that way without any ending (IE) a ZERO

Sorry but I feel you should have a beginning and a Middle and an END and you got the Beginning and Middle

mad4ravesmad4ravesover 12 years agoAuthor
What?

This is my first chapter. I'm writing 5 right now and I still have a long way to go. Of course there's no ending!

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