by CMK877181
I'm not normally into masturbation stories but this one is an exception.
It was well written, suberbly paced and very descriptive.
Great solo story. With solo stories you have to have good pacing or it does work and this one has good pacing. Can't wait for another!
Great story! I can't wait to hear about her future housesitting adventures!
Still 11 days left. Time for her to get to get online and find out what those other toys are for! Good story!
The next ten days or so ought to be interesting--she will be able to try out all the toys. Enjoyed the story.
holy fuck i thought i was wiped out but this story? damn, it brought me back twice
Really enjoyed this. It's incredibly realistic and well-paced, not in a rush to get where it's going. I would love to read a chapter two someday about the rest of her housesitting time.
Well written and constructed (and proofread). Great lead-up to the finale with well-placed and varied description.
Good erotica, refreshingly focused on a young woman finding pleasure with her own body on her own terms. I enjoyed the starts and stops Michelle endures before treating herself, and the reader, to an intense climax of the story.