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andtheendalmost 14 years agoCongratulations
Your story was chosen for highlighting in the Story Feedback section under the ANDTHEEND thread, post #258.
I gave you a 5 vote for your effort.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoPick a tense, any tense
And then stay with it. I got whiplash reading this.
Not to mention the writing was pretty bad, generally.
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