All Comments on 'Her Friend's Promotional Party'

What will happen next?

Another wimp cuck story.....

and then tells everyone he hates them. WTF is wrong with you dear annony? You must be a retarded pig, and I mean no offense to the pig!! Gave you a 5

gave you a 5 and hope you'll continue it!

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but when writing in the tough Loving Wife's section you have to be ready for the slings and arrows. Decent premise, although the hubby's acceptance of the friend inside his wife is a bit shocking, it is never explained-just kinda ho hum, it happened.

Shouldn't there be one wife who will fight blackmail? Of course, her hubby here has no spine, so I guess she was right.

the booze or the personality trait. TK U MLJ LV NV

I hope you will be writing a part 2. Love to read more

hope she becums his slut

everytime you comment like that it tells us all what a looser you are. gave it a 5

you bimbo

Right. You keep posting "comments" slamming others for daring to have a different opinion, and THEY'RE the losers? On what fucking planet, asshole?

Larry is not the ass. He's an opportunist. The unnamed husband is the wimp ass. As soon as Larry's hand was on his wife's knee he should have stood up and cold cocked him. Story sucks. Cheers!

This is what I wanted from my wife........ but got it from a girlfriend after my divorce. But she never charged lol.

What was the point of this?

Who the hell is this bonnietaylor thing who gives out 5s like she does blowjobs?

What a sick husband and stupid wife. The author must like to make their characters weak and spineless

I actually liked most of the story. At the end however, should have just told him to fuck off and die, then throw herself on her husband's mercy.

The writing was atrocious, though. Spelling mistakes abound along with the wrong form of word usage.

Read more works on here and keep trying

Insta whore? Seriously, its like a brain damaged 14 year olds ridiculous wet dream.

Just another female writer that hates men? Certainly made a point of making the two male characters here either we can stupid or arrogant and animalistic. Just pushing another feminist agenda?

Incredibly stupid and ugly. Pathetic Main character, can't call him a man because he certainly doesn't act like one toward his wife. Hard to figure if the writing comes from the heart or the mind in general, but you'd have to be a pretty Twisted mind and a very ugly heart to write this.