All Comments on 'Her Good Samaritan'

Great story. Very well written

A wonderful love story. Nice job

I love your characters. One of the best stories on Literotica. Keep writing. You are very good.

Hope there is more to come .

Too many necessary incidents requiring suspension of disbelief- just passing the bar, parents loaning money for a house, and a mysterious recluse for a neighbor - no mystery, no real conflict

Well,,, an okay stoory,,hot sex! There better be future chapters! You can't leave us hanging! 😁😁😁

Very stilted, and what a narcissistic blowhard the mc is!

Good story!

4

For the love of gods please stop over using their names. Every damned speaking sentence has one character starting the damned sentence with the other person’s name.

I’ve seen this in several poorly written stories on this site, stop doing it.

Everything is too rushed to be plausible. His law practice plan makes no sense. The LEGAL thing he could do is attempt to relitigate the divorce due to the fraud conducted by the ex-husband in the divorce. What you have him do could open him to charges of extortion. Now, if the ex-husband agrees to a new settlement after he starts the ball rolling, that might work. --- The older woman is described as a stay-at-home mom (but is alienated from her daughter) and all of a sudden has to go to work. If you rewrite this I would advise you to reframe the start of the young lawyer's career, have a slower build of affection between the two, clarify that the ex-husband railroaded her and she didn't have the resources or will to challenge him, and have the lawyer act like a lawyer instead of as a blackmailer.

Tiny hands don't groan -- re-read that sentence!

5 stars. However, when did the ex change his last name from Martin to King?

That's it? Is there more? If not this was pretty much a waster of time.

Great story , it has potential to continue which I hope you do ,

I hope there is a part 2 excellent job.

FTDS. 4/5 for not putting Chapter 1 in the title.

excellent story. the ex is not going to be happy giving up that kind of money. need a chapter 2. again excellent story.

Fanfuckingtastic story.

I think it was well done, polished and enjoyed the little details and how they were developed. With or without the sex between them, I loved the passion throughout.

Beautiful story of love. Kind people deserves each other.

I enjoyed your story very much. Thanks

Love the build-up. Surely there'll be a sequel or at least more chapters?

We do not need to know the rest of their relationship. He loves her and will give her a large settlement for her life. Sex is just icing and we can eat the cake without it.

Fantastic is all I can say!

Typical shyster lawyer and pretty good groomer.