by Nakedcraving
Ignoring potential emotional entanglements (ie. trusting her to always want the husband more), unplanned pregnancy or VD are two reasons why such a non-monogamous relationship would eventually lead to trouble. A better story should address how they're managing those risks.
I can appreciate a story about stag/vixen relationships, as long as it is more realistic about those risks. So, I have to give this a 3 for being too brief and ignoring those other complications, and merely touching on the husband's insecurities and arousal.
Some people have problems with fictional stories and critique them as if it was real. nice storyline.