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All Comments on 'Her Initiation'

by heathrb4

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Asia69Asia69about 14 years ago

Keep writing, I would love to hear more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Some constructive criticism

The word "taunt" means to annoy, insult or humiliate. The word you should be using is "taut," meaning tight or under stress.

Otherwise, a good read :D

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