All Comments on 'Her New Church Friend'

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PrfsrPrfsrabout 2 years ago

Cute story, but you need a good proofreader to catch all the little errors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Sounds as if someone is writing out of experience, if I had to guess. I enjoyed the anticipation, like I do in real life, almost as much as the happy ending!

mormonhousewifemormonhousewifealmost 2 years ago

i need another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Seemed like the guy was a real tool, all those lies about impregnating being a marriage proposal. Still hot.

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