All Comments on 'Her New Family'

Definitely needs a couple more chapters.

My dad used to fuck

My sister on a regular basis any time my

Mom stepped out. When I found out I wanted to fuck her too and did. Til he caught us and everything changed. Holler if u guys ever did anything similar, thx mastevens001 yahoo

Fairly good descriptions but it has to be believable and have some connections. Why would her sister not try to introduce Ginny to more activities and not participate? It just doesn't flow...

Nice beginning for Ginny, but it needs at least two more chapters to develop their loving story.

So unbelievable, but oh so very hot!!

More please, and soon please.

Loved your story and look forward to seeing where it leads

Hot! But,wouldn't it be great if a hot-to-trot son is introduced to the carnal mixing? It seems like Lydia would be open to it. Sonny could come home from college and join the frolics. Plenty of room to expand here. Great start.

There may be plans for a son. I cannot reveal. Patients ;)

Try not to go from past tense to present tense.

Also if it's singular it.is was not were as in she was not she were.

It makes reading the story easier.

Oh and it's patience not patients.

Would have been readable EXCEPT for the use of "Mr. and Mrs, O'livette " by an adopted young girl ....... rubbish..... 3 pages until getting to "momma" ....... this makes this girl"s adaption for the sake of fucking her by all everyone in the household

"SICK SHIT " when you think about it. since I picked this out to read , I'm hardly against incest stories..... To take advantage of a delicate mind like this is pure

trash shite....... sorry.

Very well written

You definitely need to expand on this family. More please !!!

Nothing really nice to say so I’ll leave it at that.