All Comments on 'Her New Voice, Her Only Husband'

Maybe this should have been Part 1? This is well written as the other 2 parts, but is nothing at all alike the other two parts...This was even a little funny...You say in this part about the husband: "He's not as weak as you imagined"!!! But this is difficult to understand after the 2 previous parts...very difficult...3* just for this part...

1*

great LW story, fuck annony!

Says the whore of Lit.

But not very good, yet. Keep at it. An intriguing first chapter of a story you are not yet qualified to write. But you shouldn't let that stop you. It hasn't so far.

It works. Just not consistent as yet. Will be a very distinctive style.

LWlurker

Total garbage.