Her Next Husband

Очень хорошая история! Правда, честно скажу, я бы вряд ли вернул жену. Все же она в течении 10 недель готовилась к измене, умышленно и хладнокровно. То что она не изменила лишь удача и верность Брэдли, а не ее решение.

Так что вроде и не было измены, но в душе она была. Автор хорошо закончил историю!

Good, well-written story. I could really relate to the main character's emotions. I think if it had been me, I would have kicked her to the curb when she initially said she wouldn't sign the "list". She had just admitted she would have done nearly all those things without hesitation for Brad. Her hesitation doing it for me would have been proof she didn't see me the same way. I still like the story and like the fact they reconciled.

Enjoyed the story- somewhat far fetched but we’ll written

My wife’s is Jon Bonjovi

What made the story work is the reality involved. By that I mean that not all, but the majority of marriedwomen do things with no conflict that they would never had done before marriage. After marriage, more woman than not say and do things to their husband that they would never have done or said when they were married or engaged. Why, because they don’t think it will lead to divorce and they don’t care about their husband’s feelings, nor do they respect him. A plurality of those majority of married women will even believe agreements that were made before marriage and were dealbreakers, either are now open for renegotiation, or, simply don’t matter anymore. This story is an excellent example of the above

Loved the story. Author very articulate. Roller coaster emotional. Hope the writing continues. 5+

A lot of fun to read. Well thought out.

Silly Femdom agitprop.

The author started out with an excellent plot idea. As he said: "This was supposed to be a short story (per my dream/nightmare) but my characters took on a life of their own and my fingers just kept on typing.

He should have stuck to the short story. In the end the MC became a despicable jerk and it seemed the story turned into a very sick story of humiliation and a need to completely dominate his wife. There were no signs of deep and genuine love either way.

Idea and writing skill exhibited: 5 My personsel enjoyment: -10

Fitting retribution/restitution from the irritating, unappreciative, insensitive, hypocritical wife!

Portraying Ellen as a nice person — that certainly aged like milk lol

This is what happens when writers write "organically" a complete God damned waste of time. F.

You're right. It went on waaaay too long. MC went from righteously angry to ridiculously cruel. There's punishment and there is torture. In real life, a person's body language, their eye contact, their demeanor, the quality of their voice, as well as the 'tells' a 30+ year couple understands about their partner... all those things provide feedback. So, MC didn't read any of this and just piled on, beat her down. Yeah, she deserved her comeuppance, but hell, Bradley's words did that to her. When MC kept pounding and pounding after that, you lost me. I began to intensely dislike Curt Dylan. He went beyond punishment; he broke the woman he professed to love for 30-years. Stories like this, which "take on a life of their own" need to be put up for a couple of weeks and reread. You also need a couple of honest beta-readers. Rewritten, this could be submitted for commercial publication. As it is? It's over the top. 3/5.

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LPN

All the denials in the world wouldn't have been very convincing should something like this happen in real life (which is very unlikely).

"Holly-weird" - author has clearly listened too much to the con men on AM talk radio.