by BothWorld
What a great story. Had me hooked from the beginning, all the way through.
The build up till the end, had me wanting More!
What did she give up?
Nothing we saw.
I hope the hubby wakes up, and leaves her.
But he won’t, this is not that kind of story.
This was seductive abuse.
Abuse isn’t sexy. Even when you couch it as such.
Good premise.
Gave up before the end.
Lacked extended teasing/edging of him.
And SO full of typos and wrong words it was too disconcerting for me.
You certainly need to learn the difference between VENERABLE, which is what you wrote, and VULNERABLE, which is what you meant.
Two stars.
True domination and submission, not the abusive violation of consent that is so popular in most stories. It is by far the best D/s story I have read so far.
One of the hottest stories I’ve read…A must read!
I own a wide variety of cock rings (over 50) and I can tell you this story is telling the truth. Also, the sexiest and most erotic wife’s an author has written about. The only bad part is I need more of this story, but it looks like the author has stopped posting stories here.
And to the negative comments below about prison and divorce…did you actually read the story? If you don’t like this story, you don’t like erotica. Why are you here?
OMFG!!! I never knew I had any interest in some of the cum eating and play that's in this story. But if my lover (my wife is NEVER going to do this to/for me) took me on this trip...I'd feel as if I was ahead of First Class!
Whew! I don't know if I've cum this hard in years!
Hot story...More bullshit than reality. I KNOW what happens to a cock ring after cumming. My wife really likes putting a ribbed sleeve on a 2 c vibrator and sliding it in and out of me til I explode in her mouth and all over her face. I've offered to have have her use one of our the strap-ons on me, but she said, "but then I couldn't suck you".
Love this story. I've leaked and cum many times over the years thanks to it. Especially love how she continues to feed him his leaking cum.
Thanks for writing. I hope you are doing well.
Great story, if you continue and Feminze him try adding Strapon Cum. Just a thought?
Leaving the ring on for any amount of time is a very real health hazard. And shoving that doldo that hard into his ass would have ripped the sphincter muscles so badly he would have needed emergency surgery to avoid bleeding to death. What a bitch! As soon as he can walk, he should have divorced her.
Good premise.
Rushed sex.
Needed much more teasing foreplay.
Lacked tension.
Three stars.
Couldn't stop reading. Wishing my wife was doing that for me. Hopefully you finish his journey. I want to see how you want it to end.
I was afraid this was going to be another cuck story but I was waaaaay off. This is probably closer to many couples reality or they wish it was but are afraid to make that leap of faith in their partner. I get it, it’s scary to put yourself out there and even more so when you suggest something that they may call you a sick pervert and leave you while telling the world or at least your world. I would have really enjoyed seeing where this went after that night of fun and sexual fulfillment. Still a 5 star good time.
Interesting premise.
But every sex interaction is rushed. Lacks details. No tension at all. No convincing necessary Too automatic.
Three stars.
I loved that it stayed between the husband and wife. I was taken in when she ordered him to lick his cum, and he quickly obeyed. Kissing deeply after the blowjob was very hoy, but giving him the creampie sitting on his face was scorching! I was really able to identify with the submissive man letting his wife seduce him into anal. The mutual love, desire and pleasure made the story a kinky little tale I think I might enjoy living. In all, this is a lovely fantasy that I'm sure I will continue to contemplate.
I absolutely loved this story. You put into words my deepest fantasy, second only to the craving for someone to take me like that. I found myse.f wanting more yet feel that was a good stopping point. Now excuse me while i go look for more lube, thank you,
This might be my favorite story on lit. Now I just need to find the right man to fuck. Yum.
I wish my wife would do this for me. I’m so turned on by sissy porn and would love a hard strapon in my ass.
Wow!!! Loved this story. Getting ready to go out tonight and already have a lot of pre come in my pink panties!! Can’t wait to get ass fucked hard!
Long wearing of the rings is a health issue. Cold water in the shower and it slips off. An ice cube for a minute or two and it slips off. A pair of dykes cuts it off at any time. She's using, abusing and manipulating him for her own desires. What a bitch. Time to dump her.
A gift that keeps on giving(cumming). Your story really hits the spot, still popular. If that was my wife I just might consider i
This author's only story that is not Gay Male or T & G should be in anal, so more people would ignore it. At least she didn't find him a real cock to suck.
Wowzer great story it definitely got me hot and bothered thinking it was me in his place
Oh my god this story covered so many of my fantasys especially when she sat on his face and drained all of his juices into his mouth wow 😳
I loved your story along with your amazing mind. I wish that was me being seduced and fucked like that.
superbly written, loved the encouragement she gave and got him there in the end, thanks
Beautiful story I can relate to every word. I love the feeling of climaxing after a good hard pounding and it’s amazing to be able to keep going working that cock so soon after an orgasm and yet hungry for another
With his legs on her shoulders, she should direct his ejaculation straight into his mouth.
Interesting premise.
Had great possibilities,
But where was all the teasing? And the edging?
"She gave me a wirld class blowjob" is a statement. I can't inagine how a good blowjob could be described so unerotically.
Three stars.
I liked the story, but it was way too long. The husband obviously liked the idea of sucking cock and getting fucked in the ass so his wife should introduce another man to service him and her!!
Just got through reading the story and it kinda sounds like the wife and I and we both love it she's the best wife in the world
I love it, quite believable. The story is really hot. She’s my dream woman… unconventional, willing to explore their sexuality, without caring about what others may think. She knew exactly where she was taking him. What’s not clear to me is what we’re the panties, suspenders and Nikons, unless her objective is to sissify him in a continuation…
But your grammar is way off. He looked vulnerable not venerable.
Too many people spell lose as loose. They are two different words entirely.
Plus you start off in past tense then switch to present tense.
A good idea, just a pity it didn't become a good story.
I loved this story, a husband and wife exploring each other... without cuckolding.
That’s one of the hottest stories I’ve ever read!!!! It’s one of my fantasies. I know I’m going to use a vibrator again and again and again when I read it again. The descriptions of everything is perfect. !!! I hope the next story is just as hot. Thanks for this story.
That was hot, not unexpected but probably somewhat realistic though not sure how many women in real life would desire this outcome.
The first page was my most preferred part but the last page was interesting as well. I liked this because I have thought about this before. I like being dominated more but I do have thoughts about dominating sometimes as well. Nicely done.
Очень понравился рассказ. Особенно до того момента где он начал одеваться в женскую одежду. Автору огромный респект. Продолжай дальше.
Really HOT but, it should have had a fourth ipage where she brought two guys (might as well be big black Cock who spit-roasted the guy ‘til there was cum galore!
The husband should divorce her and admit his true sexuality, or maybe just shoot himself before she really does something he can't recover from.
you can't wear a cock ring more than 30-60 minutes without risking blood vessel damage, certainly not for days in a row. Guess no enemas where needed. Otherwise very erotic, exciting
OK, he loves the taste of cum, he's actively looking at other men's junk and he's loving having a 9" dick shoved forcefully up his ass. When is his wife going to bring in her big dicked boyfriend to fuck them both, cuckolding him as so many of the authors on this site believe is prevalent and the natural order of things. Did not like this story of a faggot in training.
This was so good. This is something that you never hear of, a woman who has really got to know her husband better than he himself. I liked the idea of Male panties, knickers would have pleased me more. How good it would have been if they were titled with a simple drawer string so that his balls could drop into that pouch and then the string operated to trap them there. If he is to wear nylons in the future there will be a need for shaving his legs but of course she will have that well in hand. This is practically a handbook for women so that they might consider how to go the extra mile for their men, which is so rare actually. Perhaps there can be a butt plug, which he has with him at work and sometimes he gets a message to fit it, so that he will be relaxed enough for her when he gets home.
I liked her control voice. If this could be used to put him on a weight loss program enough so that other women might comment that he looks just a bit underweight, but this would need her kindly firmness to be increased and I think that a cage might become necessary and a cane. This would be my preference but obviously both actors must be onboard if their perfect relationship is to run as smoothly into this new future.
Great story, love to have a woman like her, so sensually devious and dominating. Would like to have a part 2.
"I have wanted this for a long time," she said. In amount of lucidness he asks, "How longs that, dear?" "A couple of years." Then she admits that she feels like her sex assignment was wrong from birth and that she has always thought of herself as male, even though she has a female body. She just lacked the courage to come out with it. And now, "I want you to always be my bitch and dress in women's clothing. Oh, and the cock ring? The latch does not come undone." Uh, no thanks. Their whole relationship has been a lie and he will eventually resent her/him.
She is a little conniving, but in a loving way. It all works out in the end... get it?
Wish there had been a little build up of what her plan(s) or thoughts are/were.
Wonderful loving story. Wish I could find more like it. I think you just needed a little more description in some areas. Like, what does Pam look like? How talll, what color hair and how long? What were the color of the panties and garter belt and stockings?
Will there be a part 2?
Yes...without a doubt I would love to have this exact scenario happen. I’m so ready to suck my first real cock. Curiosity is over. I’m ready for a real cock. Yes...I will unload their balls all night, gladly. I love to eat my own cum so the natural progression is to suck it out of an all natural real hard cock. Empty balls and a full belly is my desire. Just give me my chance. I’ll make you happy time and time again. I’ll be at your becon call or text. I’m ready!
That was absolutely incredible! I have to laugh at myself with this one. As I'm writing this, I'm actually picturing as a young kid, at a Carnival and asking some adult if I can go on that ride again?! Swear to the author! Holy Hell that was just what the doctor ordered! Thank You. YUMmmmmmm.
I so enjoy stories where wife encourages hubby to pursue thoughts of sucking a penis. I continue to wonder what it would be like to bring a man off and watch his creamy goo flow out of his throbbing cock while being up close to it.
Great story..fun to read..kept the excitement...loved it...wanted more....5 stars
One of the BEST stories on these pages. I like how she started simply with the cock-ring and then gradually upped the ante. She seduced him. And he loved it.
I agree with other comments. We need more chapters.
This is one of my favorite stories! I love how she slowly sissifies her husband and makes him love the process. Please tell me that more chapters are on the horizon.
A+, you know just what for her to say, and how most would react, i know cus that's how I would if I were either of them,
Thanx for the story
Builds the tension to a hot hard ending, love to read more..
Oh I am so wet , been wanting this for years, love wearing my lingerie and stockings while playing with my toys, send these people my way
I was totally taken into their world, such a sexually charged couple living & playing opposite gender is just so sexy. Wishing I was just hoping that someday I'd get ficked in such a manner, while dressed in sexy lingerie, feeling the beautiful sensations' as a woman does.
One of the best literotica I've read ... and so looking for a continued saga. I'm almost jealous of him - and not having someone the type of wife portrayed in this story. WoW.
Well written, with a terrific buildup throughout; one thing made me laugh, though: "venerable" = accorded a great deal of respect, and
"vulnerable" = susceptible to emotional or physical attack or harm.
It was, though, as I said, a really well written story. The gradual buildup to the conclusion is about as good as it gets on this site. Keep it up!