All Comments on 'Her Son's Friend'

by qualitywheat

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bo5254bo5254over 11 years ago
Really enjoyed your story

Reminds me an aunt I have always wanted...but so far still a fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
proof read first

The author needs an editor or to proof read before uploading in the future. This kind of error would be removed; "came of" that should have been "came off" that would have been found and fixed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Get an Editor

You really need an editor. There are numerous misspellings, and you use commas totally improperly. Because of these errors, your otherwise good story is very hard to read.

maxx308maxx308over 11 years ago
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!

An excellent story, extremely HOT and well written. Guess I was to into the story to see the typos everyone is complaining about.

Loved the story. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story!!!

OMG !!! There were errors !!!! Your detractors need to overlook them. Different story line, sexual to the n th.

Please hurry her son to sample her wares.

Thanks Don

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Very hot story. Always best to have a close read for spelling, but the story carries itself and I was reading too fast to worry about typos.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hot! Hot! Hot!

Oh my what a hot and well constructed story. Well written and at a pace that kept you excited from beginng to end. I hope you will have a an additional story with mother and son. Great Story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great Story

Great story maybe another chapter or too. Thanks again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
What typos

All I saw was a hot fucking story that made me cum hard, great writing.

pkmapkmaover 11 years ago
Hot and very good

One of your very best.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Excellent story 5/5 Stars.

Still awaiting a follow up. Maybe Ally vacations with her aister and Danny is her body guard.

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