by qualitywheat
Excellent story 5/5 Stars.
Still awaiting a follow up. Maybe Ally vacations with her aister and Danny is her body guard.
All I saw was a hot fucking story that made me cum hard, great writing.
Oh my what a hot and well constructed story. Well written and at a pace that kept you excited from beginng to end. I hope you will have a an additional story with mother and son. Great Story
Very hot story. Always best to have a close read for spelling, but the story carries itself and I was reading too fast to worry about typos.
OMG !!! There were errors !!!! Your detractors need to overlook them. Different story line, sexual to the n th.
Please hurry her son to sample her wares.
Thanks Don
An excellent story, extremely HOT and well written. Guess I was to into the story to see the typos everyone is complaining about.
Loved the story. Thanks for sharing.
You really need an editor. There are numerous misspellings, and you use commas totally improperly. Because of these errors, your otherwise good story is very hard to read.
The author needs an editor or to proof read before uploading in the future. This kind of error would be removed; "came of" that should have been "came off" that would have been found and fixed.
Reminds me an aunt I have always wanted...but so far still a fantasy