by James_Steele
A really good one, read for the 2nd (maybe more) time,
And wishing again there would be more...
One of the hottest stories ever. Just the right amount of talk and some great action.
Ad more mature women but mom son to dominate the storyline
What a great story. Please please continue on with another chapter or two or three⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Hot story. Loved the texts throughout from the girlfriend especially at the end. Waiting for more!
Wow, that was good. Now I look forward to the girlfriend coming over to be with both of them at the same time.
Face paced, hot, sensual. I smiled at the ending and of course hope there is more to the story.
Brilliant story, would love to read Kathy, Paul and Jenna getting together on another break from College... Top Marks
I don't care about your opinion, I just want a follow up for this amazing work and I know it'll be a fucking hit like this one.
You have a very good imagination...even bordering on a great imagination. But, the sexual desires a mother and son have in most taboo tales within this site needs to be even more strong and intense than ANY other relationship. Why? Because the one thing that would never change is the enduring love a mother has for her son...which is why an incestuous relationship between mother and son, when mingled in that love, would be an "Otherworldly" experience!
Just the THOUGHT of a mother looking into her son's hazel eyes as he became drunk upon the sizzling "Love-lava" (My term), that possessed his being, and that image coursing in the mother's veins with incestuous llightning, would take them both beyond any edge know to ANYONE else...period!
We all know these stories are fantasy. In real-life taboo relationships probably happen to a very small degree But, it is the thought of having someone as close as your mother, someone that loves you as deeply as your mother, someone that gave you life that when combined with the sexual desires of devouring her forbidden fruit, take you both on a lighting bolts plunge into the depths of both of your beings, and most likely never to TRULY return to a life between you as it was known!
I'm not the greatest writer, but I do have a extremely great imagination. I really enjoy mother and son taboo tales simply because the love that exists between mother and son might be often imitated but never duplicated. Therefore, an ADULT son's desire for his mother, if the mother agreed to his advances or vice-versa, could never be removed from their being by anyone else...their is ALWAYS going to be an "unbridled" love between them. The "Unbridled" love is what makes taboo tales of mother and son so alluring to readers...readers know in their minds this love exists so, even when the writing is not done well the reader is still is trapped in its spell.
Example of how I'd write.
"Soft lips tenderly opened to Skye's. The sigh Skye felt escape her lust filled breath were carnal sparks upon her son's. A mother's love for her son fused with desire were now soaked in forbidden hunger upon Skye's lips. Heat radiated upon Skye's face, daring her son to ripen her passion beyond motherly love.
"Only the tip of her son's tongue touched Skye's lips. With one last sigh Skye groaned, 'I love you son.' Time was caught, and held among the stars as Ty's mother parted her lips, speaking their desire to her son. The tongue that once fed at her large nipples daringly parted lips that had only aged in love. A woman with the fervor of a teenager was now Ty's dream girl, consumed by incestuous lightning oozing its flavor upon enchanted lips. 'Kiss me son, take my face in your hands that I never turn from you, my kisses eternally yours.'"
Peace ✌
Excellent story.
A beautiful plotline that has been crafted with care and written to expose the erotic, sensual world of mother/son incest.
Thank you for sharing
great story. really need to have Jenna arrive at their house, unannounced in the middle of the night and silently crawl into bed with them nude
Very good story!
Liked the way he struggled with lust for his hot mom.
Hope there will be a follow-up with Jenna... (twins alike in a threesome... Yummy!)
Excellent hot story... I love it... Thank You to share with us!!!! The end is just WONDERFUL!!!!... Gustavo!
Really Hot! Mom should have a full, thick bush. Just imagine the intensity of the moment as his swollen purple head touches her saturated soaked pussy lips. The erotic tingles and pulsations of her pussy on his dick as she clamped down and sucked him inside must have been almost unbearable.
Definitely needs a second part.... Just to find out how good mom is to Jenna!!!!
Although I am an older lesbian, this story is great and I would love you to write more, especially when Jenna and mother get together to eat each other out while the son is watching and I do mean mother and Jenna need to eat each other pussy and ass in many positions. GOOD WORK!!!!!
Fantastic story indeed. I hope there's more of it to come soon where there's a threesome, and they all love sharing one another. Maybe some strap on action where he fucking one while the other is fucking him.
The kind of story that gives you the satisfaction how seriously sexy and emotional it can be in hands a talented story writer. 5+++++ 10 STARS
An EXCELLENT story, beautifully presented. This deserves a least a second chapter with Kathy and Jenna meeting, either enjoying each other's company or scratching their eyes out.
Screw the threesome idea, that just ruins the raw heat between them. He wants her, and always has, that's why all his girlfriends have looked like her. Dump the girlfriend, and stay with her long term. Much, much hotter that way.
Wow!!! That was HOT!!! I have to take that cold shower now. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!
It was great. And I would love to get together with Anonymous commenter that said Wonderful! What's next? LeB. If you want to contact me
Don't leave this srory inished! It deserves at LEAST another 2 or 3 chapters
Hot story, good build up. How he could not think his mother was on to him when he'd been blowing his cum into her panties for so long is beyond me, but she seemed to be OK with it in the end, and she must have been biding her time for the right moment to let on. The final scene where they consummate their lust was hot. The "Can't wait, gotta have you now, right here in the parking lot" urgency is hard-on inspiring. What we need now(if I might be so bold as to suggest it) is a slower, more relaxed, session of love making, where Paul takes his time, going down on mom, she on him-he seems to recover quickly, which, at 18 you'd expect-til he blows a big wad into her mouth, maybe over her tits, then finally balls her in several positions til he shoots a long, slow, series of cumshots deep into her as they look into each other's eyes.....and they wake up together the next morning, and he fucks her now sloppy pussy all over again. How long til she gets pregnant with his baby?? How about if he knocks up Jenna, too??
BTW, big tits, hairless pussy....oy vey, another one. I'd like to see, just like one of the anonymous commenters prior to mine, a full blonde bush to go with those massive tits and curvaceous shape. The huge tits/shaved pussy thing has really become a cliche. I've been with somewhere just beyond 20 women in my life, and only one was shaved. I realize this seems to be a thing these days, but I suspect the reality is it happens a lot less than you see in porn. Women I know who have tried it have told me it's not all that comfortable, and requires some tending so not to get scratchy, etc.
Fun story. Hoping for more.
Great read and fairly fast paced. I like to have a story like yours with right amount of buildup. It's obvious both mother and son had been agonising for some time over getting together. I had been fantasising about my own mother, in our house the bathroom was cold and I found out she came into the main room to dry herself. I had been spying on her for some time and she must have spotted me. She walked up to the door and swung it open catching me wanking. Asking me to carry on after my initial shock I did. After a few minutes watching me she becond me into the house. She walked naked infront of me her slim body there for me to enjoy. She never spoke, just bent over the settee and I caressed her bottom , wet my cock on her pussy lips and pushed my 9" cock up to the hilt I came fairly quickly as I had been close. She took me by the hand and led me to her bedroom . We made love as often as we could till I left for Uni. We never told anyone.
Great masturbation fantasy.
At least plausible, not so weird it defies belief.
Good fun!
Bill S.
The begging confused the hell out me and I could not get into it. From the way it started it sounded like I should have known some facts that was not apparent. The beginning did not introduce the characters to me but made it clear I should already known how they were and what they were doing. Without the proper introductions I could not get into the story. Usually I would not bother commenting without reading the story. However since I LOVE mom son incest stories I had to say this for I really really WANTED to read this story. John!
Sure hope there is a follow on where all three get together. This one stopped too soon.
Great story with a good ending.
Not that the next part wouldn’t be totally welcome, but this had a satisfactory ending.
Bill S.
Im in Total agreement with all or most of your readers, this is my 3rd time reading this and I'm in need of at least one more entry. After all Jenna's on summer break too!
Wow! this is one of the best stories I've read in a long time! We really need a second chapter!
I totally agree with max one of the best works I’ve read. We do need to find out about moms pussy licking abilities.
Very erotic and well narrated. Enjoyed reading and full time my bonner was up till Paul empty in her mom's cunt I sprayed all over my face.
The intro gives no hint that the son is set to make his mother his slut, but in the end he goes all macho on her. He has no way of knowing her (sexual) preferences, but treats her like some bimbo. A little earlier he sort of narrates that people might think of her as a bimbo and a slut, but that it is just an act on her side.
Still he treats her like a bimbo? This implies him not being really interested in her 'true self', but wanting her to
act out the slut/bimbo role she utilises to advance in her career. I feel mislead, so to speak Why not start the story in a way other submissive/slut mom stories start out? Many even title their stories appropriately.
Oh Oedipus, welcome home and bring your girlfriend too.
Good story, all the angst and sex one could need. Definitely sequel worthy. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
Can't put my finger on it, but it just did nothing for me.
I think its such a wonderful compliment for any mother to receive, when she finds a fresh puddle of sperm that her son put in the gusset of her dirty panties. And what a loving gesture, for her to slip those same used panties back up her legs and squish the spermy fabric tight up against her camel toe. Its natural to desire that biological connection, and I think that if the son's girlfriend truly loves him, she will understand the magnitude of his happiness. When a son fucks his mother, nothing else matters. All desire is sated and the world is completed. Pumping seed into our own birth canal, we're like Adam fucking St. Eve in the Garden.
It’s a wonderful story and deserves a lot more than 5 stars.
It’s so easy to imagine oneself in Kathy’s place, receiving the attention from her son with his beautiful cock.
The story needs another chapter so we can find out weather they end up having a threesome and stay together as permanent lovers.
Definitely, need another part to this story... Would luv to hear about the pending 3sum... Sounds like it'll be a blast...
I must agree with the other comments below you definitely need to continue on with this story, you’ve done the hard yards, you’ve got your storyline, you’ve got your characters or you need to do now is expand a story. I enjoyed the story so far and gave you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ for your effort