All Comments on 'Her Son's Secret'

by James_Steele

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rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
You watch

way too much porn

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 6 years ago
Hot as F...

Love it, more please. Don't stop now

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I loved it!

please continue with another chapter. Thanks Again

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 6 years ago
Girlfriend and mum meet

Awesome. Please keep going.

larry74403larry74403over 6 years ago
More please

This has so much potential. But let’s skip any pregnancy nonsense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More

Please continue this story line.

dutch513nelsdutch513nelsover 6 years ago
Hot Story

That was a great story thanks .

Ducky7Ducky7over 6 years ago
A marrage made in heaven

is in the making and of course a great story line.......

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep Cumming

I hope this is the beginning.

Keep us Cummings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
So Hot!

You cannot let that story end there. It is too good to not continue on. Looking forward to Jenna spending the summer with Mom and son.

RichardGRichardGover 6 years ago

Like everyone comment on here, please keep this up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good

Keep going interesting story.

HighpikeHighpikeover 6 years ago
Agreed

Yes, keep it going

ricksforicksfoover 6 years ago
Wow...

Well done...

spankfunforspankfunforover 6 years ago
Hard as Steel!

Young Man With Two Women , Blonde, With Big Tits - Heaven! Great Story!

kennyboy82kennyboy82over 6 years ago

What an amazing story! Well written and so fuckin' horny! There HAS to be a follow-up chapter to this. The thought of that hung'n'horny guy fucking his big titted slutty mother, and the girlfriend joining in is too much!

I had no problems in awarding this 5 Stars.

Animefan2929Animefan2929over 6 years ago
Like it a lot

Keep going. I’ll keep reading. 5*

Paxo1944Paxo1944over 6 years ago
TREMENDOUS

An absolutely great story, must be at least a couple of extra chapters, next one with both ladies vying for his meat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Fantastic

Hope there is more to cum...

1smokeeater1smokeeaterover 6 years ago
Great Story

Well, I really liked this story. And I agree with the other comments on here. We really need more from Kathy, Paul and (I hope!) Jenna!

horny2doithorny2doitover 6 years ago

This is a top notch story ! So arousing and makes you feel as if you are right there as they talk and do things to each other. Yes, hopefully, Jenna will want to come down to Paul's house and get it on with both his Mom and himself. So damn hot ..... yes please more chapters. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
nice

more!

emma_raceemma_raceover 6 years ago
Wow ....

That was fantastic, I'd like more ...pretty please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Classic

Please, sir. May I have some more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

If you can make this part this good. Then you sure can make a second part just as good or better even. Lets see what you can come up with please 😘.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More & more

Now that mother & son have found the love and lust in each other, before brining the girlfriend into the mix...let’s hope the son takes the dominate role and impregnate his mother!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please! More!

Please, more! Include the girlfriend!

BigStrongRhinoBigStrongRhinoover 6 years ago
Wow very nice

We need more more more my god that was awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

please continue the this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
WOW!

All I can say is WOW! Definitely one of the best.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This needs a sequel

When she talked about wearing the panties, I almost lost it. Talk about Hot.

lantern04lantern04over 6 years ago
More please.

I'd love to see this continue.

CkathyannCkathyannover 6 years ago
So hot

Oh my God, that was so hot. Please oh pretty please let there be a part 2 with a 3some!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Outstanding

Loved it. More Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MfhtoorMfhtoorover 6 years ago
well damn good

well my dear I loved it and I want a sequel

NinegoodreasonsNinegoodreasonsover 6 years ago
a full 5 from me

really nicely done. a little longer than i usually go for but well worth a read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
yes

yes please more

jojo9696jojo9696over 6 years ago
More

Absolutely fantastic. Horny as hell. Yes, the same as the others, another instalment please

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Give us more

You have got to continue this story!

FragBot3000FragBot3000over 6 years ago
Fantastic!

Love the story and I hope that there's a continuation coming. 5*!!!

Leotardstights69Leotardstights69over 6 years ago
Great Story

Please add a second chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please add more chapters!

Great story and I hippie you continue to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Cumming

Man that was hot just came all over myself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I wasn't the first person to comment on

the resemblance between my mother and freshman year in college girlfriend I was going to school in New England, she was from Australia), my girlfriend was. On Mom's first visit to campus she teased me about it, then teased Mom me about it. I almost shat a brick when she did, but Mom just laughed, said she'd noticed it in several pictures I'd sent home.

So when Mom heads back home the first thing my girlfriend wants to do is a mother-son role play. I pretended to be reluctant, but she saw through that bull shit right away and it became a regular part of our sex play.

Then my mother invited her to stay with us over the Christmas holidays and simply assumed that we would share a room and a bed.

Needless to say by New Years Day we were all sharing a single bed and I found out that Mom and my girlfriend had been in regular communication since that first visit,

She returned to Australia at the end of my sophomore year, but not after many happy sessions with Mom and me. Mom and I, at various stages of intensity, have remained lovers ever since.

Look forward to reading more of your work.

GaryBlovesagoodstoryGaryBlovesagoodstoryover 6 years ago
summer to come

Yes, he WILL have a wonderful girlfriend and future wife. And the story continues.

guiltypleasureloverguiltypleasureloverover 6 years ago
more please

You must add parts 2 and 3!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Just an amazing well written story

This was one of the hottest stories I've read recently. I really hope you continue this in a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sequel sequel sequel

Loved it, hopefully you write at least one more chapter.

Tony StrokesTony Strokesover 6 years ago
Awesome start

Looking forward to seeing the sequel to this, hopefully more scenes involving Paul & Kathy, and later on including Jenna.

MiniwandMiniwandabout 6 years ago
More

You have to write the story with Jenna and his mom. This story is already super hot and with Jenna it will be lega hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Oh

Oh so Hot!! Five stars! Please, this really needs another chapter with Jenna added to it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More, more...

Definitely need chapters with Jenna and maybe other friends and family. Well written.

vonLassenvonLassenabout 6 years ago
This one definitely need several successors.

I really like this one. Looking forward to read the next one.

Kind regards

vonLassen

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 6 years ago

Please post a second chapter with his girlfriend coming to visit!! We need to see what happened when mom and son got home that night too!! So fucking hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
6 Stars

This was worth the extra star. Hoping you continue this as a series! Party on.

Munchie184

horny2doithorny2doitabout 6 years ago

Damn, this story is one of the best written and arousing stories I've ever read on this site. I've been reading these for many years and Yes we certainly need to hear more from Jenna and Paul needs to call Jenna when she is alone and let her tell him how hot the vid and photos make her plus ..... then Mama needs to have a session with Jenna before she comes to visit during Summer break. Having all 3 doing each other would be a huge erotic dream come true. Please more....... thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Loved it butt,,,, he took a pic of his cock to send gf but then his mom figured password whike he was in bathroom sending pic of cock , got confusing there but over all great story hope gf get to taste mom and some hot positions come about with the three of them

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
really hot

need chp. 2 but don't know what his relationship with gf would be, cause all he need is his mom, he loved her so much, and their connection much much stronger

cricketxcricketxalmost 6 years ago
Good read

Little confusing with the cell phone/restaurant/bathroom scene but ignoring that and a few sentences with left out words, it was a great read. Believable characters and situation. Thanks!

Azrael1801Azrael1801almost 6 years ago
What happened

Loved the build up, the story and tention between mother and son. But once the sex happened it was fast and furious which ruined it, maybe could have done with another page or two for them to explore themselves rather than being a quick wham bam. Hopefully you write a second chapter which could see them making love rather than having raw sex, and exploring thier sexual relation ship

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Chapter 2!

This needs another chapter and it should be longer, get the three together.

photokenphotokenalmost 6 years ago
ch2 please

I would love to read chapter 2. please

MaryAndersonMaryAndersonalmost 6 years ago
Fine story with hot mom and horny son

doing what comes natural.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
MORE! Chapter 2?

This definitely needs a second chapter where Paul marries Kathy and Jenna both, then takes them on a Honeymoon, where he breeds the both of them, then keeps them both pregnant, and watches as their big Tits get bigger, and full of Mother's milk for he, and their babies. Paul could also make Kathy and Jenna his submissive Sluts, Fuck-Toys, as well as his Sex Slaves.

DebbieXDebbieXover 5 years ago
Great Ch 1......

Thank you so much for sharing. Any chance of a Chapter 2?

BlackJackSteeleBlackJackSteeleover 5 years ago
Keep It Up

Five stars.

atlgreeneyesatlgreeneyesover 5 years ago
Sooooo Hot!!!

Loved the buildup and the banter. Adding the girlfriend looking like mom was perfect!! You know how to get a reader hard!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Whatznext?

So Jenna is invited to join them. The 3 get along fine. They're all struck with their similar appearances. Over a meal Jenn mentions she was adopted. Kathy asks her birth date. She turns pale on Jenna's date. Paul asks "what's wrong" ? It turns out Kathy gave up a daughter for adoption when Paul was X years old (work out the correct age differences). Kathy asks Jenna where she got her name. Jenna's Mom told her she was named after the head nurse at the local hospital who organized the private adoption. Jenna fer Roberts was Kathy's Aunt & head nurse ! Paul & Jenna had different fathers. 🤗😎

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The best pussy

I don't have issues w incest but I just realized I have deeply desires for my mom as well She was also beautiful. I only have one wish I have an addiction to a full curly bush and wis Kathy had a full bush whe he fucked her. MMMMMM great story.

Sldr8317Sldr8317over 5 years ago

When is chapter 2 coming?

AnnalovespornAnnalovespornover 5 years ago
Wooo, loved it!!

This was so hot and loved the build up on it too! Hope there is a next chapter, great work☺

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
wow looking for chapter 2

you got 2 do more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Hot, But...

It was hot, but I don't get any thrill out of slapping a woman's butt, and I don't know a lot of women who like it either. I also think a Mom needs a full bush. Other than that, it was hot.

LovingMe23LovingMe23about 5 years ago
Ahhh!

Loved this! I love being spanked.

GRYFANxGRYFANxabout 5 years ago
More!

This definitely needs a sequel!

EnjoyBothEnjoyBothabout 5 years ago
Oh Yes!

I have to admit, I've read this one twice and have added it to my favorites. Well done. Erotic and primal.

irishdwolf1irishdwolf1about 5 years ago
Nice

i didnt even make it to the third page before i had to "take care of business" and i was at work no less lol excellent job

GirlWatchinGirlWatchinabout 5 years ago
Hot!

This deserves an encore! Several, to tell the truth!

WolfenSS69WolfenSS69almost 5 years ago
Great story!!!!

Awesome story!!!! This can become s multi chapter story!!! Just think about all that can happen??? All three come together as a family and both became mommies...

SensualZilla72SensualZilla72almost 5 years ago
OM to the f**kin' G!!

This is just too much!! Excellent job!! Imagination's in overdrive!!

dottie86dottie86almost 5 years ago
Fuckin' AWESOME!

LOVED IT and want more...sexy, hot, and love the kissing after eating the pussy which I LOVE to do! Fuckin' AWESOME story!

blackknight314blackknight314almost 5 years ago
Again, too short.

I can't add anything that hasn't already been said.

xavierwxavierwalmost 5 years ago
Fortunately, I Read...

...the other comments left for you on this story. Like a couple of others, I can’t add anything that hasn’t already been said, except...

DAYUM!!!

X-Man

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
MORE

Please post more. That is the hottest story i have read in a long time

ROCKY70ROCKY70almost 5 years ago
THIS STORY COULD START A FIRE !!^*!^*!^*!

Most stories start cool and end hot, not this one it's hot out the gate....THANKS

FoggyKernelFoggyKernelover 4 years ago
Fucking hot, hot, hot

But there's still more story for you to tell here. What did they do once they got home? Did mom agree to eating pussy? This could easily be made into a couple of chapters and given the hot-ness of the story very enjoyable!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I like a little more vocal expression

Especially when has been some buildup, I like to hear the mother moaning, swearing, calling out her son's name, telling him to fuck her harder. Verbally expressing her pleasure. The same goes for the son, he could be telling her how good her pussy feels, He can also be swearing, telling his mom to change positions.

gep262gep262over 4 years ago
Oh Wow

Fucking hell this was sooooooo hot and damn sexy that i was there taking part. Great stuff keep it up

playtime999playtime999over 4 years ago
incest isn't the same

Incestuous sex loses its appeal if everyone is always and automatically hot for everyone else. What's new about that, when they have perfect bodies and sexual apparati to boot? Incests needs doubt, hesitation, fear of taboos that are gradually overcome by seductive, convincing means.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 4 years ago

It's been a couple of years since this was published. Since you're still writing, any chance of a followup chapter to see if Kathy does lick pussy as well as she sucks cock?

HragsHragsover 4 years ago
A 15 star

Wow,this is so bleeping hot. Sounds like a winner. Has his mommie and girlfriend On the same page. Love to read more to this story.

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984over 4 years ago

Funny read, just needs a continuation.

HotForLitHotForLitover 4 years ago
Definitely needs another one

At least!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
The only thing better than having a hot incestuous mom

Is having a hot girlfriend that looks just like her, and wants to join in.

Farm4Life62Farm4Life62about 4 years ago
More please

Please continue this very hot story line.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Moreeeeeee! Please!

We need more of this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
GREAT STORY

This story definitely needs a continue. Nothing would be hotter than 2 stacked and gorgeous blondes loving and competing over his big cock!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Needs a sequal

This is a hell of a hot story and would like to see a part 2 of it.

EIoPolizeiEIoPolizeialmost 4 years ago

This needs another chapter. It would be so hot to see his mom and gf together with him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great diction.

Definitely need's to result in ménage a trios.Excellent pacing and structure.

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