by WritingwhatIlike
Hell yea! I dont have time to read this right now, but I am sooooo happy to see it published! Thanks so much for continuing and blessing us with these amazing stories. Already favourited for a later read, cause I know its gonna SLAP!
Thank you for all of the messages encouraging me to stick with it. I know people also messaged the site admins on my behalf and that means a lot as well. On to part three, and hopefully less drama in the process. Thanks again. :)
Superb chapter. Not sure what the admin fuss was about but I'm pleased it was resolved to your – and our – satisfaction.
Thank you for staying with it. Another excellent chapter. And I can’t help but wonder if Carol’s going to be doing some muff diving in the next installment. Five stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Is the DIL bi, gay, curious or something else? If she can't physically fuck, there's plenty of other things that they can do. Her unwillingness to do anything else with her husband says a lot! Five stars and a favorite point!
Really happy you didn't delete everything and we got a new chapter. You're one of the very few m/s writers who writes quality work and not just cheap porn plots.
This part was very good, although felt a bit rushed to me at some parts. Enjoyed it a lot none the less.
"harem of sister-wives" not a bad idea to be honest ;)
Very nice but introducing Doug cost you a star. It really detracted from the Mother Son romance, a lot.
I haven't read it yet (no time to really enjoy it RN) but I've been checking your bio daily just in case you updated, and I'm going to make a prediction, for when I can read it: anyone who thought a freaking LLM wrote this, or even a substantial part of this, must have been high at the time. I'm so glad you're not gone.
enthralled. enraptured. enlivened. Wow! Your story is a big hit with me. I only just saw chapter two today, went back and read chapter one, then two. The story really delves into the psyches of all involved, especially mommy Carol. The build, the way you take your time- they take their time- is exquisite! For me, i don't think Mom is gonna let her son go- she's gonna want to have him as her husband! She may well have uncovered the truth about Becca- that she's turned on by women, not men- and that would certainly dovetail into her own need for her son to have and to hold her, in sickness, morning sickness and otherwise, and in health.
I'd like to make a comment about the quality of dialog between your characters. You do some of the better, if not best work on the site regarding that. The importance of dialog is often overlooked but it's crucial to creating not only believable characters, but reasonably believable situations. Too much dialog in Literotica stories is of the "aww shucks" variety and your more reality-based dialog makes the story and characters more relatable, and as such, the story much hotter.
This is truly an outstanding, tender love sory which is taking a different turn. Another chapter is required to answer the question of the "friend wife without benefts". Secondly, mother and son must workout their situation. No man could go back to his "friend wife without benefits" and stay in the marrage. Human nature just does not work that way, no matter how much he loves his "lost cayse" wife. Finally, does the wife finally accept her real personal makeup. Does she admit to herself what she really is? This series is to good to let die this way. 5 star series.
The wife he never had sex with turns out to be a lesbian. Who could have seen that one coming? ;) (Yes that was sarcasm, in case it wasn't obvious.)