All Comments on 'Her Son's Surrogate Pt. 03'

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dirtysondirtyson3 months ago

A story idea , The mother as breeding sex with the next sons !

woodwardwoodward3 months ago

Well told tale.

pcman1950pcman19503 months ago

Fun read. Would that the world worked like this for more folks.

venus_canvenus_can3 months ago

Extremely well written tale with love, lust and sex thrown in. The sex scenes are so well written that I felt that I was watching Becca, Carol and Andy engage in loving sex among them

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Nice final chapter

verbotenwriterverbotenwriter3 months ago

Lovely, wholesome, warm, relatable. An absolutely fabulous read and great conclusion.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Sex4lf57Sex4lf573 months ago

Loved this series! So glad it finally worked out for Becca! Five stars and a favorite point!

anubeloreanubelore3 months ago

So very glad the Lit admin's fit of utter madness didn't succeed in permanently driving you away. Such a lovely story! Thank you for sharing your work with us!

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey3 months ago

I loved all three chapters. Very fun and loving story.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Fantastic series! Loved it all the way.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

The story was ok but the end was ridiculous. ***

Minnie_La_LaMinnie_La_La3 months ago

Truly masterful! You handled Becca's phobia delicately but with accuracy. Kudo's to you. I am in awe of your talent!!

bucco40bucco403 months ago

Only thing I wish you would have added would have been Becca returning the favor to Carol and her talking about her 1st post eating.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Overall a good story, however the belief that sex has to be gentle when pregnant is ridiculous, if a woman is growing and pushing a football out of her pussy, I think she can handle a little "rough" sex. Regardless of Becca's sex issues, she comes off as a pushy bitch with few if any redeeming qualities in this story.

LowStrung5LowStrung53 months ago

One of the very few Long stories I cared to Finish!! Loved it

JusticeGreyJusticeGrey2 months ago

I thoroughly enjoyed this story! It was sexy enough throughout, while also having some relationship arcs on its way to a satisfying conclusion. There were definitely some turns I wasn't expecting, often to pleasing results.

Personally, I would have enjoyed more sex during the pregnancy (the story was more Becca-focused at that point), and some anal, too (hinted at but never delivered on), but it wasn't my story to tell. What was contained in this story was very enjoyable and arousing. Thank you for sharing it, and I plan to read more of your work because of it.

crayopcrayopabout 2 months ago

Great writing and I enjoyed the storyline. I felt that encounters with Doug in BC were unnecessary

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Loved the first two chapters but not this one so much.

AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

Loved the ratcheting up between mom and son. But what the heck? She didn't raise him right if he was naive and stupid enough to marry a girl like Becca. But, I guess he really did love her, and thanks to his mom, who made it all happen for them. Nice to see it worked out for all of them.

AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

Loved all chapters. Great work!

englishnospeakenglishnospeak19 days ago

Part 1 & 2 was really great, but part 3 is boring af with becca and all and you leave out anal his mom offered him in part 2! what a pity 2/5.

LechemanLecheman16 days ago

Aargh, religions and their backward practices.

I remember my eldest sister telling me our mother told her she didn't need to enjoy but it was her duty - so very sad. Took me years to get my sister to simply cuddle.

Anyway, loved the story, well done.

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Jan 15, 2024: big thank you to everyone who sent encouraging messages. I’m working on my next chapter.

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