All Comments on 'Her Vampire Daddy Ch. 02'

Your story is really good, but I would suggest that you either find an editor or a proofreader. There are a lot of typographical errors and missed words that would really improve the way the story reads if they were corrected.

I am enjoying it immensely. Thank you for sharing your creativity. I look forward to more!

*whispers* I want a Vampire Daddy!

I am really enjoying this story. Can not wait to read the next chapter. I like the story so much that it went straight in to my favorites. Keep writing pretty please.:-)