All Comments on 'Herbs and Alchemy Ch. 11'

Well, I wasn't expecting there to be all of That happening. Some of it was laid out in a great storybook fashion, and maybe I just missed the foreshadowing on the more significant aspect... or at least the less 'mundane' piece. Awesome revelation though, loved it.

Yeah. Tharo said it well. That shift for Kurdox will be, kind of traumatic. That and it really seems like something that even years down the line can flare up. Learning something new that goes against a lifetime of 'Fact' is harsh. Neela does have the easier time of it, in basically every way. Someone to guide her through her fears and make her stronger, something she's wanted for herself but has continued to struggle with alone. Now she's not. That and the power that comes with it. I don't recall if she witnessed Thornhammer going all... spooky-like, but the story of it has certainly spread. It seems like that aspect of it she may need more help with, and I suppose that's what makes Kurdoz even better for her. Luthia guide them, I guess ^.^

Also, just how hype and awesome is it that RigiZen is a thing. That's just so cute and beautiful. RigiZen is the shit! Deep in their hearts, in the hidden places, the orcs know it too. The new Chief certainly does ^.^ ~Epic tats btw, I love semi-sapient symbology, so cool.

Slow going, but I'm on it.

5 stars, you could post a stand alone story with Neela and her orc for the geek contest next month.

Gods I hope this story continues.