by tml_writer
It lived up to the anticipation. Can't wait for the next installment.
Brilliant. You are a very talented writer and I can't wait for the next installment.
This is a great story. Really touched me and I can't wait to read more of your work.
I am so glad you post a chapter a day. Don't want to wait to read another!! Keep them coming.
neither of them overlooking the perfection of the way they fit.
That line is too beautiful.
It's really annoying when you put a "?" At the end of a cut off sentence and sometimes other places where it's not necessary.
Its a good story and i agree with the last anon, it's super confusing when you put a (?) When a sentence is interrupted. Instead, a (-) would be better. The (?) causes the reader to read the sentence wrongly and it affects the flow of the story. Its a good story tho, love it