All Comments on 'Here to Stay Ch. 03'

Its a good story and i agree with the last anon, it's super confusing when you put a (?) When a sentence is interrupted. Instead, a (-) would be better. The (?) causes the reader to read the sentence wrongly and it affects the flow of the story. Its a good story tho, love it

It's really annoying when you put a "?" At the end of a cut off sentence and sometimes other places where it's not necessary.

Another wonderful chapter, :)

neither of them overlooking the perfection of the way they fit.

That line is too beautiful.

I am so glad you post a chapter a day. Don't want to wait to read another!! Keep them coming.

This is a great story. Really touched me and I can't wait to read more of your work.

Brilliant. You are a very talented writer and I can't wait for the next installment.

for another great chapter. I cant wait to read more.

It lived up to the anticipation. Can't wait for the next installment.