by TxRad
The amount of believable hermaphrodite porn is quite low, as you pointed out yourself.Yours seems fairly believable. Did you do any research into the subject? If not, I commend you anyway.
Hopefully, this is not the only entry.
Thanks for the read sir.
Great story as usual but ended much too soon. Please continue! This is Literotica and you are TxRad how can the story end with both main characters still virgins?
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Yes, I did as much research as I could but there is very little in the way of factual information. Mostly medical and not too detailed. Some of it I had to wing, shall we say.
As for more of the story, there may be more. I like both characters and they are headed off to college. Then there is the fact that they are dating. Lots of possiblities. Now if I can just find the time.
You really hit the mark on a fantastic love story. I cant wait to read how it turns out.
Great job.
Hot, like most of your stories. The story seems incomplete, though.
This was a very sweet story with great and likable characters. Mom was cool too. Is hermaphroditism inheritable? I too would love a second chapter. Thanks,
Love the premise, love the writing even more. Excellent!
And I don't mean gruel! An excellent, sensitive, sensual tale of trust and discovery. Two great characters. 5* of course.
This was an excellent story, very well written and thought out. I do hope you continue this story series!
If you do continue (PLEASE!), Luke is going to have to face his homophobia - to whichever degree he possesses. For some reason it's more acceptable in our culture for girls to be bisexual than for boys to be bisexual. With girls, from my perspective, bisexuality is hot - a fetish of mine. But I sense fear on Luke's part when he eventually has to face her penis. That is huge opportunity for a talented writer such as yourself.
Thanks!
Hope you can produce another chapter of the feisty herm and her offsider. Bikini shopping and swim lessons sound like a blast. Not forgetting needing to share an apartment as she will get too scared to live on her own.
I eagerly look forward to more of their story. It just feels to me that the story isn't finished yet.
We need this relationship to explore ALL the possibilities.
This was a great opening to an epic story. I seriously hope that you don't leave it here. They both have so much to do still, and that girl who was eyeing Janet opens up a whole other list of opportunities before they leave for college. This was well written and engaging.
Sweet and intimate. This made me feel things and have thoughts that I haven't had before. Thank you!
I very much enjoyed Janet being such a believable character, and not just a shallow sex object. It's speaks well to you as an author. I hope you make more tg content in the future ^_^
Nicely gentle full of caring. This was a great read. We should all be lucky enough have a first experience as wonderful as this story related it. Thank you for such an entertaining tale of first love.
Thank You.
My Request?
More Please. Much, Much More.
How will her mom react? How will his mom react, if she finds out?
Where ever you take it, More please.
One of the very best stories I have read in years.
Many thanks for such an excellent and loving story.
Best story ive read on this site ever! Honestly the best... must have more! I wish i could meet a woman in her 20's or 30's like Janet, in real lifet! Ive been searching for like 12 or so years now and havent had the opportunity, dead serious! I wish it could be but alas... oh well still have dreams! Keep up the amazing writing!
AMAZING!!
I truly hope you continue this story. The characters are very believable, the connection between them is simultaneously sweet AND hot, and the sexual tension is delectable! Bravo!
Thank you for the pleasure of and very happy and enjoyable read!!! My minds eye was enjoying the views and the tastes and the feel of the soft and rough and wet spots.
You write a WONDERFUL visual story.
PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER ABOUT THESE TWO!!! Maybe the moms can visit.
THANKS AGAIN.
What a juicy and sensitive story. Thank you! Perhaps an over-abundance of whimpering and stuttering, but that is a very minor quibble. 5 stars!
A sequel would be welcome.
Surprisingly good. Could us some editing, but the story flowed nicely.
Your treatment of this scenario left me envious of their experience.
I fervently hope you continue to explore their developing relationship.
The sensuality, sensitivity and eroticism was superbly chronicled with humour and intense emotion.
My final reaction was "I want that!"
Well written and nicely paced. While idealistic-too many things happened in too short a period of time- the quality of the writing made it the story line believable. Well set up for a few additional chapters.
Definitely need a follow on for this story, a really great love story developing here with good characters
good story see if you can continue with it in collageit has a good flow, as thay learn to love each other i privacy in the hustle of school
What a truly uniquely tender tale Tex.
Most people never come to realize that the greatest lover that we could ever find in life, will ultimately be the best friend that we’ll ever know as well. Just check out any relationship that’s lasted for some 30, 40+ years!
I loved the playful nature you’ve included in your main characters. Stories without humor usually suck!
A sweet and loving and fun story but the title didn't reflect that. Keeping Score would have been perfect.
Over the years I've read a lot of erotic stories in a number of different forums. Never found one like this. I've certainly thought about the subject once I knew what it was. Even fantasized about it. This story really made it real. I can imagine how difficult this can be for someone in this era. I think you handled it extremely well and maybe someone with the condition will read it and understand that some people will embrace them just like Luke did. Looking forward to Ch. 2.
A beautiful story with two people who were friends for life, coming together. Please continue this story. I found it sweet and sexy with just the right amount of sexual involvement.