All Comments on 'Hermes Ch. 01'

My 2 cents

I like how your developing your main character. He is becoming more interesting. Keep up the good work. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I like the story so far. Just wish it was a little longer!

Very good start! I look forward to reading more.

Nice start. Good set up. Good hook. I hope the following chapters will be more than one page in length.