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Hermes Ch. 01

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In the distance, I heard a faint, "Goodnight, sir,"

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4 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nice start. Good set up. Good hook. I hope the following chapters will be more than one page in length.

LookinSouthLookinSouthabout 1 year ago

Very good start! I look forward to reading more.

janus48janus48about 1 year ago

I like the story so far. Just wish it was a little longer!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

My 2 cents

I like how your developing your main character. He is becoming more interesting. Keep up the good work. Thanks for your time and imagination.

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