All Comments on 'Hero, Friend'

All you have done is tell a story of fucking without love. Nothing romantic happens. I was looking for better things from you.

have you not eyes to see? Can you not read between the lines. What you asked for was there but you had not the wit to see. Well done author. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I disagree w/ that negative comment. I saw the romance of it....hero saves girl and then lets her cry on his shoulder. That in itself is romance! I loved it. Sometimes during that romance it can turn into animal wants and move more into the world of fucking. But as soon as the highs are over...back to the love and romance! I loved it!

damn it! this is a great story, just add some personal dialouge!