All Comments on 'He's Too Young For Me'

Loved the description of the sex scene. Very hot indeed!

It needs more...

Do a part 2

hot stuff I love all ur stories very much I love also very much the

thank u! I am sexually turned on & also inspi red

*****Very entertaining love story. What a enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.

Entertaining first half but having built the mood it felt rushed in the second half.

There was a longer, more developed storyline needing to be expressed.

Good start but more please - although difficult to see how you can as there is a conclusion

So. Fucking. Hot. I adore older women...

I very much enjoyed the recounting of Linda's stream of consciousness. It was jerky-jerky in a few spots, but believable throughout. That was good and strong in your story—it made the story worth it.

You might want to devote a little more space describing things, like the weather, the interior of the Mexican restaurant, and maybe the car show setting, things like that. Linda has depth, and I think Jimmy could gain a little more sympathy. I was thinking a deep conversation between him and Linda might help, where she discovers some personal things in his background, like family history, deep loves, dreams, whatever. She would fall more in love with her studmuffin.

Overall I liked it. Older woman/younger man relationships are hot-hot!

LInda, silver hair with purple streaks! I love her! What a great character and personality. Loved this story! 5* from me

Didn't like Jimmy for her though. Too much like a stalker... willing to force her if she doesn't want it.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Great story as always! But I feel you missed a great ending sentence to the next to last paragraph:

"Fluffy came in and curled up against us."

:-)