All Comments on 'Hey, Lemme See That'

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jonmartin22jonmartin22over 11 years ago
hey!

Great to see you still writing! ..another nice one..

egon14egon14about 12 years ago
Very hot!!!

I loved the story and the premise. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Fun story

Many in friends situation are afraid to take next step. It is better to make a move than regret. In this story it is a giant leap.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Excellent work

Well written, good choices on your wording and how you set the story. I'd love to hear how the rest of their day goes.

Thanks for sharing this.

theaquarianpentheaquarianpenabout 12 years ago
What a nasty ,piece

Just the way I like them

larry74403larry74403about 12 years ago
Quality work.

This story shows good imagination and creativity. Reminds me of a few friendships that pushed those very same boundaries. This brings back some very fond memories. Thank you.

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